New Team of Young Heroes... INKED

New Team of Young Heroes...

This idea crossed my mind days ago, after reading an unfinished comic about the new New Teen Titans made by a fan in which Milagro Reyes was a green lantern and the new leader of the team. Can't picture Milagro as a green lantern, but I want her as a heroine, as I want Damian, Nell and Colin... and Jai, Iris and Sin... AND I totally want Lian and Cerdian back.
So, since DC is a disaster and probably will never give us a good comic with those good characters, well... I decided to invent me one.
I already have the first chapter, but I'm still working on a real plot... anyways here I have the first sketches of the heroes... There are two missing! But They're too young on this line of the story, so, not that important to add them since the begining.

From Everything I never had

Chapter 1: The love that is inside my heart

This is a story I wrote so long ago... before I started to hate Naruto. Actually, I don't know why I never published it... but I'll do it now, hope you like it:


The original title is "From Everything I Never Had, You Are The One Thing I Will Miss The Most" ... a really long title, I know... I tryed to abbreviate it to FEINH, but it sounds awful.
This was initially thought of as a doujinshi, but when I finished the script, I found out it may not fit the real story, and after drawing the first chapter, I dropped it. I'm taking it back again.
"FEINH" was the first doujin I started, and by that time I was all over Naruto Fandom, with shojo style, so this is about love-love: SakuNaruHinaKiba, ShikaTema, ChojIno, LeeTen.

So... here we go....

Chapter 1: The love that is inside my heart.

I will always, always be by your side

No matter how far away your heart may aim

Voice- I love you

(Naruto blushes)

Hinata- I’ve always loved you…

I always thought I was alone * A monster * Coz I am who I am, and I am how I am * Faults * That nobody could love me * Just for being who I am…

Naruto- You don’t know what you’re saying, Hinata.

What is inside me…

Voice- Monster!

Terror

Pain

You don’t know me

Hinata- N… Naruto-kun, I…

How can you say that you love me?

Naruto- YOU KNOW NOTHING ABOUT ME!

What I have inside me

Naruto- THE PAIN I CAN CAUSE…

That I can cause to you

And I’m afraid to accept someone

To hurt someone else

And even so…

With this fear that increases

I always hoped for the people to love me

To respect me

Protect the people that I love

But…

I have already proved it

I always fail

I only hurt the people I love

But you grew up without knowing...

Without being guilty…

Naruto- Tsk…

Because you don’t know my secret

Hinata- … N… No! N… Naruto! WAIT! KYUBI!

Coz there’s no way that you can know it…

Not you…

Is there?

Hinata- I… if it is because of K… Kyubi… I… I don’t care! I still love you… That’s why… please… Think about it…

(Hinata runs away)

Sakura- (thinking) Naruto…

(Steps)

(Flashback: Hinata saying “I love you”)

Sakura- (thinking with sadness) So Hinata could finally confess it to him (She changes her expression and hits her cheeks just like Hikaru) Come on! It’s not the big deal! It has always been more than obvious that she felt something deep for Naruto... but...

(Flashback: Naruto speaking- “You know nothing about me”, “The pain I can cause”)

Sakura- (thinking) His eyes, just like that time… What was he thinking?

(A hand on Sakura’s shoulder)

Voice- Are you alright, Sakura?

Sakura- Eh? Kakashi-sensei?

Kakashi- (looking at her with anxiety) couldn’t you find Naruto?

Sakura- N… Naruto?

Kakashi- Tsunade-sama is waiting for us…

Sakura- Oh! The mission… well… (biting her lip) No, I couldn’t find him… maybe we should go without Naruto…

Kakashi- What’s wrong with you, Sakura?

Sakura- Nothing… we can tell him later…

Kakashi- I’m not talking about that. You seem to be… I don’t know… in pain?

(Sakura gets too surprised)

Sakura- (thinking) In pain? (She waves her hand faking a smile) What are you saying, Kakashi-sensei? I’m OK!

Kakashi- If you say so… (turns away) I agree, we can tell him later, since Tsunade-sama has been assigning very simple missions to us… I’m sure this would be another one…

Sakura- Another distraction?

Kakashi- To keep him out of problems… and thoughts…

It seems that I can’t understand at all…

(Chopsticks on a hand)

Voice- Ne… Shikamaru?

Shikamaru- (loking at him) what’s wrong?

Naruto- Shikamaru, what is love?

Shikamaru- (blushes) W… what?!

Naruto- (looks at him, distracted) what is love?

Shikamaru- And… what’s all this about, so suddenly?

Naruto- (shrinking his shoulders?) don’t you know it?

Shikamaru- (tense and still blushed) Well… (thinking) Mendokusai…

(Naruto looks at him with curiosity)

Shikamaru- (without looking at him) Maybe love is just a lie invented by woman –you know how troublesome they are- to control and yell whenever and whatever they want…

Naruto- (confused) Maybe?

(Silence)

Shikamaru- Maybe not… maybe it is something else…

Naruto- Oh…

Shikamaru- Oh… well… I heard you got another mission… Hokage-sama is being pretty hard on you, isn’t she?

Naruto- (bored, head on his hands) Yeah… but I prefer it that way… and the truth is that the missions aren’t that hard, they’re only to keep me distracted…

Shikamaru- “distracted” (Surprised and sad, then hides his face from Naruto) Yeah…  that’s good for you, right?

Those feelings

(Naruto doesn’t answer)

I always kept saying it to her… but… was it really true?

Do I really love her?

What is it, this feeling that everyone calls love?

Come back

So... I've decided to return to this place... in english, yeah... big deal, but I'm kinda uploading my own doujinshis here, so I hope you get to them.
Can't fix the "No-Title" thing, but doesn't matter, all begginings have their own problems and not having a title option is mine.
Thank you so much.